21-06-2022, 02:29 PM
a suggestion if author agree
1. after long story feels boring if just fucking episodes.
2. try to just add some drama like cheating found by husband and after fall. this add some reality touch and story becomes believable.
3. add some resistance from deceived husbands.
1. after long story feels boring if just fucking episodes.
2. try to just add some drama like cheating found by husband and after fall. this add some reality touch and story becomes believable.
3. add some resistance from deceived husbands.