Adultery No One Dies a Saint (Completed)

[Darkgirl21901]

Hi Krish I am you follower of your stories on xossip all stories are exceptional.
I have some concern about this story at present situation
1) Anvita going for Varun will not make this story seductive since  Anvita know Varun since childhood so it seems normal sometimes. Goerge, Rajat or Shreyas is more seductive
2)Too much twist making this story sometimes boring.
3)Also Anvita training institute addition is also boring.
These are my inputs and individual point of view differs.
Great going and awaiting for next update

Dear,

Let the plots points go according to the writer.  

It's one thing to give suggestion or demand something to your liking but don't try to find holes in a story in which the writer is spending so much energy for free. 

Try to appreciate it without judgements