09-06-2022, 07:56 PM
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(09-06-2022, 01:58 PM)DevilMayCare Wrote: I get it now. You are seeing from the boys' POV. Try from Dhika's POV.
Happy Reading...
I know bro, you understand the reader's feelings better than anyone here.
Also, I didn't notice it was your reply before when I said that. So sorry for that. Will wait and read on as you write.. Keep going!