22-05-2022, 10:58 PM
Happy ending might be a myth. But the ending the story abruptly is not a myth. You had ended the story abruptly in the first edition as well. The first coitus between Arvind and Kaamna should have been special.
I understand Arvind and Kamna's hatred for Alok but you never justified why his mother and his aunt hated him so much. The character of Pushpita was a weak link. She tortures her own nephew for no apparent reason. Jaya was a lonely widow and a normal human being and all of a sudden hates her son and even enjoys killing a man.
The behavior change was not explained and that was a downer.
I understand Arvind and Kamna's hatred for Alok but you never justified why his mother and his aunt hated him so much. The character of Pushpita was a weak link. She tortures her own nephew for no apparent reason. Jaya was a lonely widow and a normal human being and all of a sudden hates her son and even enjoys killing a man.
The behavior change was not explained and that was a downer.
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