22-05-2019, 12:11 PM
(This post was last modified: 22-05-2019, 01:05 PM by INDIAN_MAVERICK1190. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
@krish
@kamdev
It took me sometime but am here with my opinion ? there is nothing to criticize this time, Krish dear you kept it as realistic as it should be. Lots of illogical comments out there but we shouldn't blame them for it, it's a matter of choice.
It's an adult world you can't make everyone happy, I don't know why cuck culture is spreading so fast. And demand it for Atul make my stomach sick. But again you can't help it cause there is always a two options for you
@ you don't like it
@ or you like it
Sometimes readers get into the head but again you can't make it clear to close on Friday.
Everybody likes erotica including me but taste of so much effect your writing skills and experience to work on it.
Why I left so many incomplete! Now you know it, This thing is not a Cup of tea for me.
And Kuddos Krish this time I must say you made a blast and the way you are moving it forward is not what I expected in the start!
Regards
Mav ❤️
P.s. :- Few chapters are still there hoping to complete them soon.
@kamdev
It took me sometime but am here with my opinion ? there is nothing to criticize this time, Krish dear you kept it as realistic as it should be. Lots of illogical comments out there but we shouldn't blame them for it, it's a matter of choice.
It's an adult world you can't make everyone happy, I don't know why cuck culture is spreading so fast. And demand it for Atul make my stomach sick. But again you can't help it cause there is always a two options for you
@ you don't like it
@ or you like it
Sometimes readers get into the head but again you can't make it clear to close on Friday.
Everybody likes erotica including me but taste of so much effect your writing skills and experience to work on it.
Why I left so many incomplete! Now you know it, This thing is not a Cup of tea for me.
And Kuddos Krish this time I must say you made a blast and the way you are moving it forward is not what I expected in the start!
Regards
Mav ❤️
P.s. :- Few chapters are still there hoping to complete them soon.