25-12-2018, 03:45 PM
Hi Krish I am you follower of your stories on xossip all stories are exceptional.
I have some concern about this story at present situation
1) Anvita going for Varun will not make this story seductive since Anvita know Varun since childhood so it seems normal sometimes. Goerge, Rajat or Shreyas is more seductive
2)Too much twist making this story sometimes boring.
3)Also Anvita training institute addition is also boring.
These are my inputs and individual point of view differs.
Great going and awaiting for next update
I have some concern about this story at present situation
1) Anvita going for Varun will not make this story seductive since Anvita know Varun since childhood so it seems normal sometimes. Goerge, Rajat or Shreyas is more seductive
2)Too much twist making this story sometimes boring.
3)Also Anvita training institute addition is also boring.
These are my inputs and individual point of view differs.
Great going and awaiting for next update