30-04-2022, 02:12 PM
(30-04-2022, 06:09 AM)jiivajothii Wrote: Good story, but lot of mistakes. had to read two times to find out the mistakes and what is conveyed in many places.
Sorry bro
Next time i will chane
My
Mistake
Now as soon as ibwill update
Iam
Not having much time
.
Now anward
I will
Update correctly
By. Zinu♨️❤