18-04-2022, 12:52 PM
Really great that you replied, as far as update is concerned negative comments were only focused on the 'more characters' in that update, they were not happy because they always imagined Anita as a homely educated housewife who can only have secret affair. they were not criticising your writing abilities and if I tell you about seduction part.. it was amazing there is no doubt in that. Detailing is awesome and story is as original as it was back then xoss"p days. I have also given many suggestions in previous updates etc hope you will consider them too.