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Adultery Anita Singh Story of a seductive housewife by seansean007 (incomplete)
(15-04-2022, 10:00 PM)Hellybelly Wrote: Sean bhai how you took these feedback kindly let us know

To be honest I was surprised with the feedback of most of the readers.I thought they might like the seductive dance of Anita, especially when I explained dance on each and every word of the lyrics to help the reader imagine in a much better way.
I have read a few stories where the female characters danced to entertain their male counterparts but never came across a detailed explanation (pardon me if there is one and I am unaware of it) of the dance movement as the lyrics progressed.I tried to create that so the readers could imagine in a much better way and enjoy. 
There were two layers to feedback, one whether the update is as per the character of Anita and the other the update itself (whether update was written in a manner to arouse the readers feeling, which is the primary reason of these stories). 
Most readers gave the feedback on the former, ignoring the effect the updates had on them while reading it.Only one reader "kinkpink" gave the feedback on both the matters.
As I already told, I am okay with the negative feedback but if I had got a feedback (even negative) on the update also (keeping aside the fact whether or not that makes sense on the character or the story because let's be honest you cannot tell it because that part may be way late in the story and by that time it might make sense) then it would have been great, but it's okay.
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RE: Anita Singh Story of a seductive housewife by seansean007 (incomplete) - by seansean007 - 18-04-2022, 12:23 PM



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