16-04-2022, 12:14 AM
(This post was last modified: 16-04-2022, 12:20 AM by BedWinner. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
Krish, I didn't comment on your previous updates since, like others, I was also disappointed with the way the story was going and I didn't wanna leave a negative review(stilled pissed at the way Meera behaved in your last update, she has emotionally cheated on Krish long time ago). But I logged again to tell you I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I my heart beating faster throughout the story. I deeply felt for Krish on his way back home. Man, this love triangle is as dirty as it can get. Krish still acted a bit stupid this time as well but at least he could recognize it instantly. If anyone ever has to explain the meaning of Alpha male and beta cuck through characters, they should refer to Desai and Krish from your story.
I still don't understand this love between Krish and Meera(they were even arranged-married). But Desai and Meera loves each other deeply. If it was in US or any other western country, then Meera would've divorced Krish a long time ago. I was sick of reading this story from Krish's perspective as I really don't like Krish's cunningness(but feel really sad for him coz its not his fault the way he is) and hated that you kept us in dark about what Meera was feeling all along. Now that we are slowly getting to know the inner world of Meera(not what she tells her Hubby), it is a like a breath of fresh air.
What she told Krish is so different from what she "felt" with Desai while fucking him. It is pretty clear now that she has deep feelings for Desai, I really wish we could read more about her confusion from her perspective. I kept wondering throughout the story if Desai and Meera are a team behind Krish's back and have been fooling him all along. I still don't know if that's true. I hope this story doesn't have a happy ending for Krish. I don't know if you've watched Mungaru Male(Kannda) (since you mentioned Shimogga) what made that movie unforgettable was its ending. It is more than just a cuckold story. It is a love-triangle and love is powerful. Please keep it that way. Also, it is time Krish grew smart and show some self-respect and understand the position he is in.
Excellent narration man! You really went to town with this one! C u soon!!
I still don't understand this love between Krish and Meera(they were even arranged-married). But Desai and Meera loves each other deeply. If it was in US or any other western country, then Meera would've divorced Krish a long time ago. I was sick of reading this story from Krish's perspective as I really don't like Krish's cunningness(but feel really sad for him coz its not his fault the way he is) and hated that you kept us in dark about what Meera was feeling all along. Now that we are slowly getting to know the inner world of Meera(not what she tells her Hubby), it is a like a breath of fresh air.
What she told Krish is so different from what she "felt" with Desai while fucking him. It is pretty clear now that she has deep feelings for Desai, I really wish we could read more about her confusion from her perspective. I kept wondering throughout the story if Desai and Meera are a team behind Krish's back and have been fooling him all along. I still don't know if that's true. I hope this story doesn't have a happy ending for Krish. I don't know if you've watched Mungaru Male(Kannda) (since you mentioned Shimogga) what made that movie unforgettable was its ending. It is more than just a cuckold story. It is a love-triangle and love is powerful. Please keep it that way. Also, it is time Krish grew smart and show some self-respect and understand the position he is in.
Excellent narration man! You really went to town with this one! C u soon!!