15-04-2022, 11:30 AM
This is some amazing creativity and writing on display.
Such a super erotic scene and Chunni is enjoying much more than Mangu. But now I feel you can make Chunni Lal's identity known to Nisha and now that she remembers how he had(along with Mangu) leered at her in the train,she is somehow excited to give in to his desires.
Also maybe Mangu wakes up at 4:30 and comes back up to discover his friend naked with Nisha and then the story could go forward in many ways.
Or you could play it out like neither Mangu nor Nisha know about Chunni s involvement and Chunni uses the situation completely to his benefit.
Although I like the first idea better. Lay it all out in the open.
Such a super erotic scene and Chunni is enjoying much more than Mangu. But now I feel you can make Chunni Lal's identity known to Nisha and now that she remembers how he had(along with Mangu) leered at her in the train,she is somehow excited to give in to his desires.
Also maybe Mangu wakes up at 4:30 and comes back up to discover his friend naked with Nisha and then the story could go forward in many ways.
Or you could play it out like neither Mangu nor Nisha know about Chunni s involvement and Chunni uses the situation completely to his benefit.
Although I like the first idea better. Lay it all out in the open.