Adultery The Defeat of Poroma

[manasi]

In the original story Paroma has been depicted as a sex starved woman falling for lust of a person outside wedlock. While she constantly tries to overcome her lust, she is lost in her sexual incaptivity.



Ranjeet is depicted as a cuckold husband who gets psychological pleasure out of his wife’s adulterous relationship and does nothing to win over his wife’s predicament.



The present author has is rebuilding a story from above themes promising to make it different. As long as his storyline follow the same theme, there is no excitement. Author need to develop and nurture his characters a bit different from the original. Clearly, he has mixed up two different stories where both are based on cuckold themes. Just by adding or subtracting some incidents from both stories (May be from n number of stories based on cuckold themes) does not justify a process of rewriting a story which is already famous on its own quality.



As a reader I would like to see a deviation from the original theme; a different approach where the leading characters (at least one of the characters) behaves differently. The flow of incidences should be justified based on new theme. There could be socio-economic impacts in behaviours.



This is my personal views and in no way any attempt to influence the writer or reads. Wish all success to author in his formidable attempts.