02-04-2022, 11:56 AM
(02-04-2022, 10:45 AM)Mgaya Wrote: Again superb update...
What a buildup to the next stage...aab toh poonam kuch bhi ho jay raghu ko mana nahi kar sakti ...karti toh pehle bhi nahi thi ..par pehle kisi ka bhala sochna tha..abhi khud ka bhi sochna hai...
I must say...the way to describe the scene with minute details is awesome...stories bahot hai...but saare itnj details main likhne ki mehnat nahi karte hai ..!!
Thanks bro, it is your suggestions which i try to implement after all.