Adultery The Defeat of Poroma

[manasi]

There have been a story posted in this forum in the Bengali section named as পরমার পরাজয় by stranger_women and two English versions called as Wife taken in front of hubby and in the Unfaithful Mothers and housewives section as Sex Games. But the English versions are somewhat different from the original Bengali story. The original Bengali story written by Stranger_women was too much into femdom and cuckolding, and actually instead of the story of a defeat of the hot wife Poroma in a sexual hot game at a party in the later part actually goes for more humiliation of the husband instead of the hot wife Poroma and don't do justice to the name. So I decided to start a thread where though I will stick to the original erotic story but will be changing it in the later part to make it more realistic and believable and do some justice to the original name. All credit for the original Bengali story goes to Stranger_women. Would like to get the valuable opinion of the members regarding a realistic version of the original story. First part will be posted shortly.

You have started one very difficult task.

It appears, you are more interested to establish the defeat of Parama. Originally, Ranjeet was forcefully converted into cuckold. Very clearly, you have taken some deviation. Even in drunken state of mind, he is able to identify the cheating as well as vested interest of his so called friends. He is able to logically argue in his favour not to break open Rahul's house considering consequences.

Ranjeet becoming cuckold implies win of Parama. Character of Ranjeet is already built against the theme of cuckoldary. Only hope, there won't be a sudden degradation in his character.

When Parama faces a character not to be mend as cuckold, she would face the reality. Because, Rahul is only interested in flesh. Responsibility and lust are two mutually opposite characteristics.

Eagerly waiting for defeat of Parama in true sense. It would be interesting to see how you mend the characters to achieve your goal.