28-03-2022, 05:55 PM
It’s getting better with every update
I am loving the way you narrate the situation and progress into the events, add a ting of curacity and slowly unfold it to the audience
I felt, Dhika is little too ready to loose her T-shirt, I would like if she is respected and she succumbes into situations where she is exposing with a little more effort from the boys.. just my opinion.
Someone else mentioned and I agree, your narrative and script is getting better than your inspiration..
pics add to the imagination
Thanks
I am loving the way you narrate the situation and progress into the events, add a ting of curacity and slowly unfold it to the audience
I felt, Dhika is little too ready to loose her T-shirt, I would like if she is respected and she succumbes into situations where she is exposing with a little more effort from the boys.. just my opinion.
Someone else mentioned and I agree, your narrative and script is getting better than your inspiration..
pics add to the imagination
Thanks
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