Adultery Dhika - An Innocent Angel

[Lollobionda]

Dear author, 

I enjoy reading your story, which exudes a wealth of hot eroticism.

BUT ...

please, do not take me wrong, because I would like to address a few points of criticism.

I am a German (male), maybe that's why I don't feel some things quite like you do and vice versa I think.

In almost all the stories I have read here at "Xossipy", the woman is most often portrayed as;

naive, 
stupid,
easily influenced,
will-less,
object in the hands of tenny students and half-grown machos who have just been released 
from kindergarten, but who are apparently so "masculine and grown-up" that they are even 
able to wrap teachers, married adult women around their fingers... etc. etc.

To me (in our culture) such behaviour is very strange and irrational !

In your story you state that the twins are adults, but when I look at their behaviour, manner and appearance, 
they seem to me more like eleven-year-old playful and spoilt mothers' sons.
From Dhika, (who is supposed to be a teacher in a college, intelligent and educated)
you make a brat who has just had her first period, namely stupid and naive...

I am trying to understand that the two "eleven year olds" Bantu and Bobby, can't help but grin before or after 
every educated sentence, like two idiots who keep on grinning their inanity;

...  hehe hehe

but Dhika ?!?
Hello, make her grow up man !!!

Sorry again for the harsh criticism....

In this sense
All the best

Lollobionda

(I will still follow the story and read till the end!)