20-05-2019, 05:22 PM
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Originally Posted by xyster View Post
i am spellbound meri bhai...
to tell u the truth.. i never took story section guys, who also are die hard NHBians, seriously as i never thought writing could be a serious business.. just for the heck of it i started my lulli story... it was very easy and came without any efforts from my side so i really didnt worry about how someone thinks about it... then i wrote my entry for this valentine's day contest.. i wrote a 12000 words in 3-4 hours...but spent three days in editing it to 3500 words... and after putting in so much effort i was very eager to know how it really came about... i sent pms to ppl to review my story and they did...
when u asked ppl in NHB about their opinions on ur stories i thought u r just being an ASW and thought nothing about ur being a writer at all... but now... after what i went through i know what being appreciated for his efforts means for a writer... and it does take an effort to bring an idea to words... it wasnt for me because both my stories are very close to real life... but for a fulltime writer who has different ideas for different stories... putting them into words really calls for an effort.. i salute u..
i wont comment on the substance of the story and your writing style... because i dont think i am capable enough to do that... me giving comments on ur story will be like uday chopra commenting on acting skills of dilip kumar... all i can say.. that while reading the story i could feel the characters... i could feel how anything was said .. the anger and pleading in the voice of the characters was all felt by me... i got angry... sad... terrified by the charcters... i think the best story is the one where the reader himself feels as one of the characters...
brilliant
Meriaiza-
Dil khush kar dita ai jatta. Yeah bro at times it feels awkward to me as well when I ask friends to read my stories and tell me what they think of the effort but their honest opinion is the only way for me to improve myself in future. Well that and ofcourse when you work hard then it's natural to hope for some appreciation. It was a difficult story to write but at the end of the day the response has been so good that I must admit that all the effort was worth it. Thanks to you bro and everyone who appreciated my effort. Honestly you guys are my source of inspiration while writing and I hope that in future as well I'll be able to give you guys stories that are as good as this one.
Originally Posted by xyster View Post
i am spellbound meri bhai...
to tell u the truth.. i never took story section guys, who also are die hard NHBians, seriously as i never thought writing could be a serious business.. just for the heck of it i started my lulli story... it was very easy and came without any efforts from my side so i really didnt worry about how someone thinks about it... then i wrote my entry for this valentine's day contest.. i wrote a 12000 words in 3-4 hours...but spent three days in editing it to 3500 words... and after putting in so much effort i was very eager to know how it really came about... i sent pms to ppl to review my story and they did...
when u asked ppl in NHB about their opinions on ur stories i thought u r just being an ASW and thought nothing about ur being a writer at all... but now... after what i went through i know what being appreciated for his efforts means for a writer... and it does take an effort to bring an idea to words... it wasnt for me because both my stories are very close to real life... but for a fulltime writer who has different ideas for different stories... putting them into words really calls for an effort.. i salute u..
i wont comment on the substance of the story and your writing style... because i dont think i am capable enough to do that... me giving comments on ur story will be like uday chopra commenting on acting skills of dilip kumar... all i can say.. that while reading the story i could feel the characters... i could feel how anything was said .. the anger and pleading in the voice of the characters was all felt by me... i got angry... sad... terrified by the charcters... i think the best story is the one where the reader himself feels as one of the characters...
brilliant
Meriaiza-
Dil khush kar dita ai jatta. Yeah bro at times it feels awkward to me as well when I ask friends to read my stories and tell me what they think of the effort but their honest opinion is the only way for me to improve myself in future. Well that and ofcourse when you work hard then it's natural to hope for some appreciation. It was a difficult story to write but at the end of the day the response has been so good that I must admit that all the effort was worth it. Thanks to you bro and everyone who appreciated my effort. Honestly you guys are my source of inspiration while writing and I hope that in future as well I'll be able to give you guys stories that are as good as this one.
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