20-05-2019, 05:21 PM
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Originally Posted by aarushi1977 View Post
I started reading this story, from the first few lines I apprehended that this story would be different from any other story in this forum and my apprehension proved to be fitting.
A very well paced story with the description of scenes were good. The pace was justified as it was a story of a vengeful actions. From the first words "GO", the writer kept the intentions in dark, which I liked most in this story. Gradually the incidents unfurled like "Rafelsia Philadelphia". Why I named this flower? Because this is the most largest flower in the plant kingdom. However the flower is not a beautiful one.
The story was definitely a beautiful one in its true sense. The writer came up with proper justification in the end as what made the main character to receive that pain.
Few points felt to be lacking, in the beginning, there should have few more description of love between Kalpana and Rahul. I think, that would have done justification to the bonding between the husband and wife.
The most eccentric part which I felt was the bang of Priya.
I finished the story with gore heart and that was the most loved thing I fathomed in my heart after reading.
NOTE : Please do not take my words as a review, I am just writing few lines that I felt about.
Meriaiza-
First of all thanks for reading the story despite finding the subject hard to read. I know this is not a review but still you shared your views about the story. I just want to take this opportunity to reply to a few points raised by you and some other friends.
The reason why I didn't wrote about the relationship of Kalpana and Rahul, or as few asked didn't described the other characters of the story in detail is a deliberate one. This story is all about revenge. Giving the back stories of all characters in detail would have only lessen the impact of the story. Every person has a story of his own but not all of them are important in the grander scheme of things. This is ofcourse my way of thinking and you and a few others may or may not will agree with this but it's important for a writer to stick to his goals while writing. Frankly if I would have written this story all over again then I will not even change a single line. This was probably my 12th story till now but for the first I'm satisfied with the result. Once again thanks for your kind words.
Originally Posted by aarushi1977 View Post
I started reading this story, from the first few lines I apprehended that this story would be different from any other story in this forum and my apprehension proved to be fitting.
A very well paced story with the description of scenes were good. The pace was justified as it was a story of a vengeful actions. From the first words "GO", the writer kept the intentions in dark, which I liked most in this story. Gradually the incidents unfurled like "Rafelsia Philadelphia". Why I named this flower? Because this is the most largest flower in the plant kingdom. However the flower is not a beautiful one.
The story was definitely a beautiful one in its true sense. The writer came up with proper justification in the end as what made the main character to receive that pain.
Few points felt to be lacking, in the beginning, there should have few more description of love between Kalpana and Rahul. I think, that would have done justification to the bonding between the husband and wife.
The most eccentric part which I felt was the bang of Priya.
I finished the story with gore heart and that was the most loved thing I fathomed in my heart after reading.
NOTE : Please do not take my words as a review, I am just writing few lines that I felt about.
Meriaiza-
First of all thanks for reading the story despite finding the subject hard to read. I know this is not a review but still you shared your views about the story. I just want to take this opportunity to reply to a few points raised by you and some other friends.
The reason why I didn't wrote about the relationship of Kalpana and Rahul, or as few asked didn't described the other characters of the story in detail is a deliberate one. This story is all about revenge. Giving the back stories of all characters in detail would have only lessen the impact of the story. Every person has a story of his own but not all of them are important in the grander scheme of things. This is ofcourse my way of thinking and you and a few others may or may not will agree with this but it's important for a writer to stick to his goals while writing. Frankly if I would have written this story all over again then I will not even change a single line. This was probably my 12th story till now but for the first I'm satisfied with the result. Once again thanks for your kind words.
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