20-05-2019, 05:20 PM
aarushi1977-
Thumbs up Vendetta
I started reading this story, from the first few lines I apprehended that this story would be different from any other story in this forum and my apprehension proved to be fitting.
A very well paced story with the description of scenes were good. The pace was justified as it was a story of a vengeful actions. From the first words "GO", the writer kept the intentions in dark, which I liked most in this story. Gradually the incidents unfurled like "Rafelsia Philadelphia". Why I named this flower? Because this is the most largest flower in the plant kingdom. However the flower is not a beautiful one.
The story was definitely a beautiful one in its true sense. The writer came up with proper justification in the end as what made the main character to receive that pain.
Few points felt to be lacking, in the beginning, there should have few more description of love between Kalpana and Rahul. I think, that would have done justification to the bonding between the husband and wife.
The most eccentric part which I felt was the bang of Priya.
I finished the story with gore heart and that was the most loved thing I fathomed in my heart after reading.
NOTE : Please do not take my words as a review, I am just writing few lines that I felt about.
Thumbs up Vendetta
I started reading this story, from the first few lines I apprehended that this story would be different from any other story in this forum and my apprehension proved to be fitting.
A very well paced story with the description of scenes were good. The pace was justified as it was a story of a vengeful actions. From the first words "GO", the writer kept the intentions in dark, which I liked most in this story. Gradually the incidents unfurled like "Rafelsia Philadelphia". Why I named this flower? Because this is the most largest flower in the plant kingdom. However the flower is not a beautiful one.
The story was definitely a beautiful one in its true sense. The writer came up with proper justification in the end as what made the main character to receive that pain.
Few points felt to be lacking, in the beginning, there should have few more description of love between Kalpana and Rahul. I think, that would have done justification to the bonding between the husband and wife.
The most eccentric part which I felt was the bang of Priya.
I finished the story with gore heart and that was the most loved thing I fathomed in my heart after reading.
NOTE : Please do not take my words as a review, I am just writing few lines that I felt about.
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