20-05-2019, 05:14 PM
aarushi1977-
The prologue was vague but well written. Vague in the sense that actually i was unable to understand as what was actually happening. Later as i read that twice i understood that those conversation was happening between two persons who wanted some revenge and has deep sanity brewing inside them.
First chapter seems to be very lovely.
The second chapter took me by ride, what a hell of a description of the helpless ness of husband and his beautiful wife writing in pain and fear. The most attractive was the sanity of the two unknown characters.
Third chapter took me by ride. My ears were literally burning while i read those lines when Kalpana was getting bangd.
Hat's off to you dude.
Looking out for more.. will write as i go on ..
The prologue was vague but well written. Vague in the sense that actually i was unable to understand as what was actually happening. Later as i read that twice i understood that those conversation was happening between two persons who wanted some revenge and has deep sanity brewing inside them.
First chapter seems to be very lovely.
The second chapter took me by ride, what a hell of a description of the helpless ness of husband and his beautiful wife writing in pain and fear. The most attractive was the sanity of the two unknown characters.
Third chapter took me by ride. My ears were literally burning while i read those lines when Kalpana was getting bangd.
Hat's off to you dude.
Looking out for more.. will write as i go on ..
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