20-05-2019, 05:14 PM
Drift_King21-
At start i must explain this that its very hard for me to review Meri Bhai's story as i look upto him for writing and this was the very story which got me inspired so much that i started writing so coming to the story.
The first thing you note about Vendetta is that it moves at a very fast pace as i m a book addict and read so many novels i love when a story dont get lethargic for no good reason and thats one of the beauty of this story, it dont even give you breathing space, one after another event keeps on unfolding and you just holds your breath that whats next ?? ... Now the plot-construction is just too good its not everyday that one's read a story with such a solid plot and then the execution is just top notch, during the whole story i never felt i got disconnected from the main protagonist i was feeling like i m moving all along him and visualizing each and everything which was happening in the story. Specially the killing of SALEEM was just too good and i dont have words how to explain that scene that was just a classic and the fact that i read the story about a month back and still i remember SALEEM just because of the way Meri Bhai described that scene i don't remember in my whole life in any thrilling novel i have read anything close to that even. And ofcourse the ending was absolute marvelous cant think of a better ending than that and i have heard that Meri Bhai is planning to write the sequeal to this story that will be really great this story deserves a sequel.
Now coming to the negatives frankly i cant find any simply because i m in love with this story but may be the bang scene was written for the erotic story contest as Meri Bhai mentioned that actually he planned this story to be posted in the contest but i think in such a story the detailing of the incident was bit over the top. But thats a very little point because other than that its hard to find any negatives.
To conclude my review i think this story is simply one of the best in the stories section and may be i have not read many other famous stories of stories section and they can be better than this as well i have no doubt about that but i think my passion for this story will not decrease one bit. And as i mentioned in my dictionary i don't find proper words for the praise of this story and i hope Meri Bhai dont take such long breaks between posting their stories .
At start i must explain this that its very hard for me to review Meri Bhai's story as i look upto him for writing and this was the very story which got me inspired so much that i started writing so coming to the story.
The first thing you note about Vendetta is that it moves at a very fast pace as i m a book addict and read so many novels i love when a story dont get lethargic for no good reason and thats one of the beauty of this story, it dont even give you breathing space, one after another event keeps on unfolding and you just holds your breath that whats next ?? ... Now the plot-construction is just too good its not everyday that one's read a story with such a solid plot and then the execution is just top notch, during the whole story i never felt i got disconnected from the main protagonist i was feeling like i m moving all along him and visualizing each and everything which was happening in the story. Specially the killing of SALEEM was just too good and i dont have words how to explain that scene that was just a classic and the fact that i read the story about a month back and still i remember SALEEM just because of the way Meri Bhai described that scene i don't remember in my whole life in any thrilling novel i have read anything close to that even. And ofcourse the ending was absolute marvelous cant think of a better ending than that and i have heard that Meri Bhai is planning to write the sequeal to this story that will be really great this story deserves a sequel.
Now coming to the negatives frankly i cant find any simply because i m in love with this story but may be the bang scene was written for the erotic story contest as Meri Bhai mentioned that actually he planned this story to be posted in the contest but i think in such a story the detailing of the incident was bit over the top. But thats a very little point because other than that its hard to find any negatives.
To conclude my review i think this story is simply one of the best in the stories section and may be i have not read many other famous stories of stories section and they can be better than this as well i have no doubt about that but i think my passion for this story will not decrease one bit. And as i mentioned in my dictionary i don't find proper words for the praise of this story and i hope Meri Bhai dont take such long breaks between posting their stories .
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