Thriller Vendetta "Revenge Is The Purest Emotion" (Complete)AMA Wining Story by Meriaiza
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Exbii story section ke sab se bade writers me se ek Meriaiza ke naam se shaayad hi koi exbiian waakif naa ho. Bade dhoom dhadaake ke saath unki nayi story ''Vendetta: Renenge is the Purest Emotion'' shuru huyi...........sabhi readers bas ek naam 'Meriaiza' dekh kar padhne ko daud pare. Sabon ne wo sab yahaan paaya jitne ki ummeeden lekar yahaan aaye the. Lekin kahaani ka end utne dhamaakedar andaaz me nahin ho saki jitni aisi kahaani ke end par honi chaahiye thi. Shayad isme writer ki kuchh din ki absence ka dakhal ho.

Writer ne apni taraf se kahaani ki shuruwaat me Revenge yaani 'badla' ki kai definitions diye hain. Jaise......Badla ek purest emotion hai. Khoon ka badla khoon ka usool is duniya ko insaanon se paak kar de sakta hai. Badla....dard ka izhaar hai......Badla......jangal ke kaanun ki ek qism hai.

Apni kahaani me meriaiza bhai ne BADLA ki inhin definitions ko justify......badi kamyaabi ke sath kiya hai.

Kahani shuru hoti hai ek bade brutal khooni drame ke sath. Jise padh kar rongte khade ho jaate hain. Picturisation itna badhiya tha ki reader ko lag raha th jaise us khooni draame ko apni aankhon se dekh rahe hain. Iss me 'Badla' ki aag me sulagta ek naujawaan......Kahani ke hero Rahul se bad-tareen badla leta hai. Rahul ki wife Kalpana jiso wo dilojaan se chaahta hai.....aur jo uske bachche ki maa ban'ne waali hai....ko uske marriage day par aisa Tohfa milta hai........jaisa sahayad kisi ko naa milaa ho......aur naa hi kisi ko mile.

Us namaalum naujawaan ke laaye teen gundon ne pahle jaanwaron ki tarah uski izzat loota........phir bandhe huye Rahul ke saamne hi uski gardan kaat di gayi aur uske jism ke tukde tude kiye gaye. In sab ko writer ne iss khoobi ke sath likha ki Rahul ka dard sabhi apne dilon me mehsus kiye bina nahi rah sake.

Tab ek naya haiwaan ka janm hua. Rahul ab badle ki aag me jhulaste huye insaan ke roop me bahut hi khatarnak aur haiwaaniyat se bhara dikhayi pada.

Iske baad wo apni security officer ki naukri ko chhod unn darindon ki talash shuru kiya. Is me pulisiya sujh bujh aur purane relations ka sahaara lete huye aur apni jaan hatheli par rakh kar usne unn teen darindon ko ek darinde ki tarah hi khatm kiya.

Jab wo finaly aakhri aur sab se aham kirdar se badla lene pahucha tab use pata chala ki ye sab draama kyon hua. Aur tab wo khud se shamsaar hua.

Ek insaan jaane anjaane me jo galtiyaan kar baithata hai uska nateeja kya hota hai ye wo nahin jaan paata. Masoom Priya se apni mehrumiyon ka badla lekar Rahul usay poori tarah bhula diya. Usay pata bhi nahin chala aur na usne koshish kiya pata karne ki......ki pregnant hone ke baad kaise Priya ne apni jaan de di. Uski maa mar gayi. Baap paaglon jaisa ho gaya.

Tab usay usay ehasaaas hua ki usne kya kar diya tha.

Iske baad bhi uska dil isay insaaf nahin maana jo Kalpana ke sath hua. Aur aakhir me usne apna badla poora kar liya.

Meriaiza bhai ki Shaahkaar tahreer hai 'Vendetta.......' Ek kahani ke jitne element hote hain sab yahaan mojud hai. Bhumika, Central View, description, characterisation, diologs, climax aur end. Sab laajawaab hain.

Kahani me kirdaron ke bich hone waali baaten bahot loud aur selected words waale hain. Baaten is qadar filmi andaz me hoti hain ki kabhi kabhi hakikat se thodi hat kar bhi maalum padi. Lekin jiss level ke kirdar the shayad unki baaten waisi hi hoti hon....ham ye maan kar maze liye.

Sach hai ki badla ek aisa jazba hai jo samne aaye har chiz ko apne lapete me le leta hai. Iss se mutassir insan sairf apna badla dekhta hai.......aur kuchh usay dikhaayi nahi deta. Aur sath hi ham ne yah bhi dekha ki 'dar-guzar' kar dena bhi ek bada badla hai. Rahul ko zinda chhod kar usne Rahul se kaisa badla liya ye ham kahaani ki aakhri hisse ko padh kar jaan gaye.

Iss tarah kuchh kamiyon ke bawajood yah ek bemisaal kahaani hai. Iske har hisse me writer Meriaiza ke kalam ka jadu dekhne ko mil jaata hai.
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RE: Vendetta "Revenge Is The Purest Emotion" (Complete)AMA Wining Story by Meriaiza - by Ramesh_Rocky - 20-05-2019, 05:08 PM



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