05-03-2022, 11:56 PM
I have to say this to dear Author and my fellow reader friends:
Krish, we all know and understand that you put immense hard work and writing such erotica is not at all easy. We all have seen that most of the readers got disappointed just because the way things ended in the last update but here I would like to put in some praise for each and every word you wrote other than last para. We can not just ignore that and just because of ending ,we can't give negative reviews for the whole update. I feel positive reviews do need to come in.we can't simply discourage you just because the way things ended in the update. You are mature enough to understand the reviews of readers were filled with anger/discouragment because the level they are attached to this story is unimaginable.This is not just a story for us and all this because of you. So, I hope you will take positivity even from negative feedback which you always do.
While reading the complete update , I want to convey that you never forget to mention the much needed minute details which makes the story alive in itself. The complete update was wrapped with some awsome details. May it be how the venue hall was decorated or even how things things were placed inside the hall. You described the venue as if we were standing there in the hall. The part where you gave complete description of what Meera wore for the evening and how she was looking did not go unnoticed. Her Legenga , duppata , blouse depth and amount of cleavage she was showing , such details are really appreciated and we just love that you go into such details.They really help build the imaginations.
You even add those little banter conversations between Meera,Desai and Krish which does not let us get off the idea that this is just some erotica. For instance the first funny conversation between Meera and Desai when latter one just stepping in their house about Plane incident which made Meera laugh was a good one. The complete angle you created about smell thing from whiskey thing was damn good.
Because of your minute details and all such small/long conversations ,we can't differentiate if the story is fiction or real which is the best part. I just love reading and noticing such small details. Thank you for such detailed thinking and putting efforts of such level.
For instance these few dialogs/details did not go unnoticed and they immensely aggravated the intensity and aliveness of story.This I'm adding because we readers never appreciate you for such minute level thinking but here I want you know that we do notice such things :
>'Meera somehow missed wearing vermilion on the day of her Anniversary and Sheetal pointing it out ' : was an interesting thought you added and that too she missed on her Anniversary night.
> "Was Desai on this Flight? " : It showed Meera unconsciously is concerned about Desai's well being. It gives a good angle to the story that how the most hated person turned into a one who is being cared now. Interesting !!
>'I noticed she was missing her duppata' :This line really affected and made me instantly imagine how Meera must be looking at that very moment and how the view must be for Desai since Krish had described how her cleavage looked in blouse. (First I thought may be Meera undid her Duppata on purpose but I guess Meera was in the same state when Desai came, so she didn't do it intentionally. Guess Desai was just Lucky)
>"I had my plan to gift a fabulous gift for you" : Along with Meera even I was disheartened that I couldn't see what he could have gifted. May be it among other things a dress for Meera ? which I'm sure Meera would have worn later on. Its interesting to image Meera in Desai's gifted dress.But ultimate gift which I feel would be something different.
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I Don't Know but it had always made me curious what if Meera was some real character ,then how would she look alike. There is this girl on Instagram and I don't know why butI always relate Meera with her appearance and it helps me imagining Meera because she matched with details Krish gave us about Meera.For my fellow friends her id is : shambhavi1997
(May be she with a bit bigger boobs can be related with Meera. Although everyone must be having some or other person whom they must be connecting her with. I'm always curious if anyone has better option.Do share with us LOL. (Other one I found was _mithuvigil_. Even she gives same looks as that of Meera)
Request FOR ALL THE READERS :-
I have a point which I want to convey to all my reader friends. I think we should stop adding comments & predicting what would happen next in the story . We can always enjoy ,praise or comment about the update author gave but should stop sharing the ideas that what would happen next and I have a strong reason for it , hope you all will abide by me if I'm not wrong.
I know we all get curious after reading update and put in our imagination to guess what will happen next in the story but I think this plays negative for our Author and in turn for us as well. I'm sure among all the ideas which all readers share about future happenings, some fill in correct and due to this ,Author must get into confusion because we all know that Krish has the habit to prove all readers wrong so that everyone gets surprised when he finally updates and for doing so he might have to change the script which he already had in mind because some reader already shared the same idea.This thing even might delay the update from krish as he would be again changing the script to make it different from all the readers point and sometimes I assume in doing so, it worsens the script to which we readers ultimately complain.Its just a thought and I don't know if Krish would agree with me .
I read some reader say that now Meera and Krish will now shift to Desai's flat but is there any need to do so and put pressure on Author to change the script if this really is supposed to happen.Why ruin it? I think we should keep these points to ourselves and should enjoy the already shared update. I'm not complaining in any way but just sharing an idea which I thought of. Even I also do same thing sometimes but I think I will stop that now onwards and will restrict myself to present update. For instance just to share a spoiler even I thought that the ultimate gift which Desai will give to Meera of could be a child along with some other materialist gift and the child will belong to Meera and Desai because we have seen Meera taking Krish's response several times on how he sees the perspective of Pawan accepting baby from another man although Meera would never think this as a possibility and she would never plan this but you never know what circumstances may happen.We also know Desai doesnt use protection so lets see what Krish and Meera has to say about this if something happens in future. oops i should not have spilled that idea but that I did just to validate my point and I will stop doing that. I will also request my other reader friends as well to do so and stop predicting the future aspect of story. Moreover , Krish can also help me if I'm wrong.
Thank again dear author for providing your writings. Hope you will post update and won't take long time of month to update as it really starts frustrating us.
Thanks
Krish, we all know and understand that you put immense hard work and writing such erotica is not at all easy. We all have seen that most of the readers got disappointed just because the way things ended in the last update but here I would like to put in some praise for each and every word you wrote other than last para. We can not just ignore that and just because of ending ,we can't give negative reviews for the whole update. I feel positive reviews do need to come in.we can't simply discourage you just because the way things ended in the update. You are mature enough to understand the reviews of readers were filled with anger/discouragment because the level they are attached to this story is unimaginable.This is not just a story for us and all this because of you. So, I hope you will take positivity even from negative feedback which you always do.
While reading the complete update , I want to convey that you never forget to mention the much needed minute details which makes the story alive in itself. The complete update was wrapped with some awsome details. May it be how the venue hall was decorated or even how things things were placed inside the hall. You described the venue as if we were standing there in the hall. The part where you gave complete description of what Meera wore for the evening and how she was looking did not go unnoticed. Her Legenga , duppata , blouse depth and amount of cleavage she was showing , such details are really appreciated and we just love that you go into such details.They really help build the imaginations.
You even add those little banter conversations between Meera,Desai and Krish which does not let us get off the idea that this is just some erotica. For instance the first funny conversation between Meera and Desai when latter one just stepping in their house about Plane incident which made Meera laugh was a good one. The complete angle you created about smell thing from whiskey thing was damn good.
Because of your minute details and all such small/long conversations ,we can't differentiate if the story is fiction or real which is the best part. I just love reading and noticing such small details. Thank you for such detailed thinking and putting efforts of such level.
For instance these few dialogs/details did not go unnoticed and they immensely aggravated the intensity and aliveness of story.This I'm adding because we readers never appreciate you for such minute level thinking but here I want you know that we do notice such things :
>'Meera somehow missed wearing vermilion on the day of her Anniversary and Sheetal pointing it out ' : was an interesting thought you added and that too she missed on her Anniversary night.
> "Was Desai on this Flight? " : It showed Meera unconsciously is concerned about Desai's well being. It gives a good angle to the story that how the most hated person turned into a one who is being cared now. Interesting !!
>'I noticed she was missing her duppata' :This line really affected and made me instantly imagine how Meera must be looking at that very moment and how the view must be for Desai since Krish had described how her cleavage looked in blouse. (First I thought may be Meera undid her Duppata on purpose but I guess Meera was in the same state when Desai came, so she didn't do it intentionally. Guess Desai was just Lucky)
>"I had my plan to gift a fabulous gift for you" : Along with Meera even I was disheartened that I couldn't see what he could have gifted. May be it among other things a dress for Meera ? which I'm sure Meera would have worn later on. Its interesting to image Meera in Desai's gifted dress.But ultimate gift which I feel would be something different.
>
I Don't Know but it had always made me curious what if Meera was some real character ,then how would she look alike. There is this girl on Instagram and I don't know why butI always relate Meera with her appearance and it helps me imagining Meera because she matched with details Krish gave us about Meera.For my fellow friends her id is : shambhavi1997
(May be she with a bit bigger boobs can be related with Meera. Although everyone must be having some or other person whom they must be connecting her with. I'm always curious if anyone has better option.Do share with us LOL. (Other one I found was _mithuvigil_. Even she gives same looks as that of Meera)
Request FOR ALL THE READERS :-
I have a point which I want to convey to all my reader friends. I think we should stop adding comments & predicting what would happen next in the story . We can always enjoy ,praise or comment about the update author gave but should stop sharing the ideas that what would happen next and I have a strong reason for it , hope you all will abide by me if I'm not wrong.
I know we all get curious after reading update and put in our imagination to guess what will happen next in the story but I think this plays negative for our Author and in turn for us as well. I'm sure among all the ideas which all readers share about future happenings, some fill in correct and due to this ,Author must get into confusion because we all know that Krish has the habit to prove all readers wrong so that everyone gets surprised when he finally updates and for doing so he might have to change the script which he already had in mind because some reader already shared the same idea.This thing even might delay the update from krish as he would be again changing the script to make it different from all the readers point and sometimes I assume in doing so, it worsens the script to which we readers ultimately complain.Its just a thought and I don't know if Krish would agree with me .
I read some reader say that now Meera and Krish will now shift to Desai's flat but is there any need to do so and put pressure on Author to change the script if this really is supposed to happen.Why ruin it? I think we should keep these points to ourselves and should enjoy the already shared update. I'm not complaining in any way but just sharing an idea which I thought of. Even I also do same thing sometimes but I think I will stop that now onwards and will restrict myself to present update. For instance just to share a spoiler even I thought that the ultimate gift which Desai will give to Meera of could be a child along with some other materialist gift and the child will belong to Meera and Desai because we have seen Meera taking Krish's response several times on how he sees the perspective of Pawan accepting baby from another man although Meera would never think this as a possibility and she would never plan this but you never know what circumstances may happen.We also know Desai doesnt use protection so lets see what Krish and Meera has to say about this if something happens in future. oops i should not have spilled that idea but that I did just to validate my point and I will stop doing that. I will also request my other reader friends as well to do so and stop predicting the future aspect of story. Moreover , Krish can also help me if I'm wrong.
Thank again dear author for providing your writings. Hope you will post update and won't take long time of month to update as it really starts frustrating us.
Thanks
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