01-03-2022, 04:57 PM
Nicely done Harsha.
What I see here is the stories with a touch of melodrama & emotion are well received and readers participate with the dos & don'ts, that too when the lady charecter indulges in adultry and the husband knowing it but still allows for his greed (may be cockoldness) or to show his empathy and at the same time emotionally feeling bad and the more lady character turns away from him the more agony he encounters.....these things are hot cakes.
If possible take the story in that direction that menaka ignores him even when he comes back for Dara...something like that or as your original story line of Dara dominating Menaka
Overall a nice try, keep it up bro
What I see here is the stories with a touch of melodrama & emotion are well received and readers participate with the dos & don'ts, that too when the lady charecter indulges in adultry and the husband knowing it but still allows for his greed (may be cockoldness) or to show his empathy and at the same time emotionally feeling bad and the more lady character turns away from him the more agony he encounters.....these things are hot cakes.
If possible take the story in that direction that menaka ignores him even when he comes back for Dara...something like that or as your original story line of Dara dominating Menaka
Overall a nice try, keep it up bro
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