01-03-2022, 10:25 AM
(This post was last modified: 01-03-2022, 10:26 AM by Givemeextra. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
Dear Author....
Thanks for continuing this gem, few points:
1) Split your posting into multiple paragraph's
2) Have space between para's, so easier to read. Don't have long paragraph
3) Don't have to many characters in one episode. Let it be gradual. You may know majority of story had watchman + 2 hot wife's only
Eager to see how the story build's up. Again thanks for taking this up.
Thanks for continuing this gem, few points:
1) Split your posting into multiple paragraph's
2) Have space between para's, so easier to read. Don't have long paragraph
3) Don't have to many characters in one episode. Let it be gradual. You may know majority of story had watchman + 2 hot wife's only
Eager to see how the story build's up. Again thanks for taking this up.





