01-03-2022, 06:13 AM
(This post was last modified: 01-03-2022, 06:15 AM by Lollobionda. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
I had to read the last episode several times to believe what it said.
I couldn't believe my eyes because I didn't think it would end like this (...!)
"The Grim-Reaper as wedding anneversary day guest"
It only took three sentences to ruin a complete part III of this story ...
The fact that the author brings Meera and Desai together intimately on their wedding anniversary
day (and this, in front of an audience too) has ruined the love and security that welded Meera and Krish
together in one fell swoop.
Like a scythe in the hands of the reaper, separating the stalk from the grain.
What a pity for what had been an almost perfect story ...
In this sense
All the best
Lollobionda
(Note:
maybe the author will rethink the last passage, and go an alternative way, which will bring
the story on the old path we all readers liked, and made us fan's of Meera and Krish!)
I couldn't believe my eyes because I didn't think it would end like this (...!)
"The Grim-Reaper as wedding anneversary day guest"
It only took three sentences to ruin a complete part III of this story ...
The fact that the author brings Meera and Desai together intimately on their wedding anniversary
day (and this, in front of an audience too) has ruined the love and security that welded Meera and Krish
together in one fell swoop.
Like a scythe in the hands of the reaper, separating the stalk from the grain.
What a pity for what had been an almost perfect story ...
In this sense
All the best
Lollobionda
(Note:
maybe the author will rethink the last passage, and go an alternative way, which will bring
the story on the old path we all readers liked, and made us fan's of Meera and Krish!)
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