Adultery मेरी पत्नी और मसाज वाला

[rajkumar90]

first half was awesome... but in second half you rushed the story so much that Sneha ultimately seemed like a slut than a reluctant, shy wife whom you portrayed very well in the first half. It almost felt like I m reading 2 different stories with different women. Sad to see that you wanted to end the story so much.

True.. Story ka end karane mai bahut lajdbazi ki.. Story and plot kafi achhi hai.. 

Writer isko rewrite kare to behatar rahega