01-02-2022, 05:53 PM
(01-02-2022, 10:02 AM)Ro.hitbig Wrote: This story is seriously dangerous than dandupalya...if the author heard of it.
Alok is such a strong personality to bear all this, i know your plot is going to be morr severe on him making suffer but if he comes out of his mother's fake charm and think to uplift his father's name story gonna be interesting.
Continue mintu, never read this kind of slow poisonous story
I felt the same way earlier but stopped it because of gaps in the story. This story revolves against one guy ALOK & Rest of the family. Anyways, I dont read very negative thinking stories.
Cheers!!!