Misc. Erotica BASSSSS.. KARO ..(NAMRATA ek PAHELI)

[rehanboy16]

I agree with you,birju successfully seduced namrata after long planning now it was his time to enjoy sweet fruit but unfortunately it didn’t happen I will give credit to writer for giving 2 twists in the story which shows his writing skills but long pause to the story making story less interesting and will be very difficult for writer too to continue the story where it is paused.
The point I was making was that if story continued to revolve around sunshine society it would have reached its destination now.savla suchita story was on interesting mode so was namrata birju.
You would have added more characters in the society to make it more interesting.

I think it is too late now. The writer has given up on the story and asking to amend his previous updates when he is not even committed to write any further is a no brainer. It happens with every writer at some point where they are just not able to write any further as too much imagination in their brain exceeds their physical capability to write. I just hope he comes back and finish what he has already started and end this story on a good note.