Adultery INDIAN WIFE & ESCAPED CRIMINALS

[yenjvoy]

The story for now has ended. I had written only upto this point. On literotica, the story has come to a definite ending.

I have kept an open loop for this story on xossipy purposely so that of I ever feel like writing it further in the future, I can.

Thank you so much for your feedback and appreciation for this story.

Bdrew.

Every sexually liberated woman has a secret r a p e fantasy. It was really interesting to read yours, and your wonderful command of the language added greatly to your fertile imagination. Kudos. Definitely one of your best. Tiny edits here and there, and this is probably one of the best stories ever by an indian author of erotica. You are a unique talent.

That said, I think the story does deserve closure, or at least an epilogue. What exactly does a woman do after the intruders leave. Do they leave quietly after having their fill, without harming her out of gratitude for the never before thrills she made them experience? And how does she deal with the aftermath, coming down from the sdxual highs to confront the psychological toll of her own response to the situation? Does she go back to being wife and mother? Or does the unleashed desire within her compel her to scour the media for any news of her captors after they leave, while she goes through the motions of her mundane life, feeling bereft and empty. I think that is a possibility, at least until one day months later she gets a call out of the blue from her sexual soulmate fahim, and against all reason and sense she flees to join him in his hideout in nepal or wherever, unable to resist the heat of his mating call?

There is meat in this story still. I feel this is just the first act. Many adventures still await our heroine.

Another scenario was when you made teji go to the door to collect the pizza, exposing his well publicized face to the delivery boy, who also heard the lady of the house hollering the equally well publicized name of the other escaped convict in ecstasy. He slinks away and informs the security officer, who surround the house while the orgy is in progress, and they break in, in the morning hours to capture or shoot the finally exhausted men and liberate their poor innocent victim.

Many options. Look forward to a revisit at some point, after the release of this climax has abated and you feel restored again to continue. The characters you created are too compelling to leave open ended, so will wait patiently for your post orgasmic langour to subside. Thanksffir a really well written piece.