18-01-2022, 02:16 AM
Oh man, this is serious narration... What a skill buddy... Interesting story with beautiful narration. As a fellow writer, I'm really impressed with your work.. Emotions, sex, relations everything awesome. Looking forward for next update. Especially I liked the Sundari, dhamodhar way of telling story.. Because they are being couple for 28 yrs and their cheating and pain well exposed by ur narration beautiful. Personally I don't like Sundar characterization because when ur husband doing good at bed.. Women won't go for other buddy. But sulo doing so which is not acceptable in my point of view and also I don't find any interesting in sundar's playboy kinda story so i skipped sundar's narration Other than that superb. Story ah positive ah kondu ponga. ?????