14-01-2022, 10:01 AM
(14-01-2022, 09:37 AM)rehanboy16 Wrote: Perfect update yet I believe It will be another kinky thing they will do in a hurry and Akmas will be left thirsty again.
You’re the writer and the great brain behind this masterpiece but please try and do not delay the hot steamy sex with Shamsher and Balraaj as it will become usual if they just come everyday rubs their cocks and then leave.
It’s so seductive, no doubt about that but people like Balraaj and Shamsher are not the kind of people who will just be satisfied by rubbing everyday. Especially Balraaj who is now open to Akmas and having dirty phone talks with Akmas and she is loving it and getting extremely shameless day after day.
Please don’t mind as I’m loving every bit of it but sometimes I know from a writers point of view they may think that after sex, the story will loose its charm but delaying it for too long won’t do justice to this masterpiece.
Hope my feedbacks are not taken negatively.
Regards,
Waiting for an amazing update !!
Thanks rehanboy for the compliments and giving a glimpse of readers point of view , ,this story needs patience , i have lots of thoughts about this story, i have started this story to make a defference in xossipy that every updates do not have to be everyone having sex , every story now are then are starting with a sex scene , those were the days when ,pinkbaby,rajkumar,and more did their masterpiece work, and in between writers like royalking , amoljan,ajanmol, dingdong,rafiqshaik tried their best some are still writing their great stories , Thanks to everyone for being a part of this journey this journey ends here ,