24-12-2018, 01:09 PM
Consequences Pt. 16
Author's note: A great benefit of writing stories is corresponding with people who are living this lifestyle in real life (in contrast to my stories that are just based -- sometimes closely, sometimes loosely -- on real life). CompersionHub told me some snippets of his hot wife with her lover, describing how her lover fucked her so good that when she got horny, she found herself thinking about her lover instead of her husband. He said her lover "used up all her horniness, so she didn't have any left for me." That line really struck me, it so captured perfectly the cuckold fetish. With CompersionHub's permission I'm using that line in this chapter.
A few comments about recent feedback ... wow, I thought "Loving Wives" readers were tough. I was wrong, they don't compare in ferocity to "Incest/Taboo" readers. Why did I abruptly use the "Incest" category for Part 15? It was intentional. I guess I can only say, the challenge with a serial is the reader can't immediately turn to the next chapter (in contrast to a book). You'll just have to wait, assuming you want to. And I am 100% okay if you want to drop off. If fact, if this story bothers you then please do, cause it ain't getting any easier for Mike.
Along the same lines, I want to respond to this comment on the last chapter:
When?
06/04/14 By: Anonymous
I first off want to thank the author of this series for taking the time to write a story that so accurately depicts the conflicting emotions of a man who loves someone but also enjoys seeing that person with someone else. It is a terrible way to go through life but it at times feel like it's something you cannot control. It becomes a journey of highs and lows that I do not think can be compared to any other personal relationship between people. Some of you call this sick and in some ways it is a sickness, it is a need to have someone you love constantly betray you and hurt you while at the same time trying to have faith that at the heart of it all they still love you. There is no cure for this other than hours and hours of therapy trying to get to the root of why a person feels the constant need to be degraded. This being said you the author have made some of us care about these characters and feel their pain and love. In an interlude in the previous series you mentioned that chapter 12 was going to finish this rollercoaster of emotions we are riding in reading this series. Now with your latest post we are only in week 3 of a proposed 9 1/2 weeks of drums and jen's dating....then we have to get to wish three. Even the greatest rollercoaster rides in the world come to an end. Can u please let us know what some kind of time frame is for ending this. This way if we want we can step back for a while and let you finish this excruciatingly accurate emotional piece. Then we can pick it up when it is finished so we don't have to wonder if this going to take us and our own feelings for these two main characters into weeks and weeks of wondering and waiting. As a personal request and I don't expect it to affect your storyline I really am hoping that you can find a way to have these two stop playing "the game" and find happiness with just each other.
So here's the timeline. We're about to start Week 4, which is a separate chapter. I think Week 5 will be a separate chapter. Weeks 6-9 kind of go together – you'll see what I mean – but I haven't decided if I'm going to combine any of the weeks in a chapter.
Then we move to the last "phase" of Consequences. Where all the loose ends get tied up. I'm not sure how many chapters that will take. Sometimes the characters start talking and I just go with it.
So, if you'd prefer to read the rest of the story as a finished work, rather than a serial, then I think Consequences will be done this summer. But I can't give you a specific date because I don't know. In the last chapter of Consequences, I'll try to remember to put "Final Chapter" or something like that in the description so you'll know it's the last one.
Then – and I'm sure this'll get a lot of cursing from those of you who despise my work -- I'll tell you there is one more story about Mike and Jen after Consequences. Hope this helps, thanks for your comment.
Some people have commented that this story is long and redundant. Here's what I'm trying to do with this story. I'm trying to document the life of a couple who are into this hot wife/cuckold lifestyle. It's an extreme fantasy and they're learning. They do something once, there's drama, so the next time they try to learn from their mistakes. You might ask, why don't they stop if there's so much drama? Because they're addicted to the excitement. And because this is fiction (please remember that).
Here's how I see their evolution:
In "He Fucked My Girl," Jen and Mike start their journey. They're both young, still in college. Jen loves Mike, but she's a romantic, and she's attracted to guys who are not good for her. Mike pushes her into Ricky's arms (because he's got a major cuckold fetish), and Jen falls heads over heels over Ricky, both because she's addicted to his body and his alpha male personality, and because she loves the thrill of a new relationship and all the NRE. Mike ends up getting really upset. Jen sees that and breaks it with Ricky.
Mike and Jen get back together. But they both still have fantasies and desires. They love each other but they go through a rough patch. Jen wasn't ready to break it with Ricky. It's not that she loved Ricky, she didn't. But the affair hadn't run its course. Mike senses that. So that kind of distances Mike and Jen. Jen's vulnerable then to when she meets Scott. And deep down Mike wants to see Jen with another guy again. This plays out in "All In My Head." But as with Ricky, there are no boundaries with their game. Jen loses herself again with Scott, and Mike adds fuel to the fire with his extreme fantasies. There's more drama, and Jen finally breaks up with Scott.
So now we get to "Making It Work." Mike and Jen now have a better understanding of each other, and themselves. Jen starts a relationship with Tom. Mike is good with it. He's more confident in himself and more secure with Jen. He's okay with Jen's affair with Tom, he's getting off on it. Jen really likes Tom, but she doesn't lose herself as she did with Ricky and Scott. She's older, has more experience, is in better control of herself, is more sensitive to Mike's feelings. Problem is, Tom really wants Jen. He forces Jen to make a choice. Jen of course chooses Mike. It really isn't a hard choice for her, other than not wanting to hurt Tom's son, who she's gotten close to.
Now we get to the present story "Consequences." Mike and Jen are 100% committed to each other. They still want to play the game, but now they are confident how to make it work for both of them. Because they're confident, they start exploring more extreme elements of the cuckold fantasy. Mike gets jealous and upset at times, but Jen has come to understand that those dark emotions turn Mike on as long as she doesn't go too far. The worse she got was with Mike's first wish, but that was exciting for both of them. So they're both really enjoying the game. Mike likes her with Drums, he loves seeing Jen wild and carefree, embracing her sensuality, being a social butterfly, being flirty, loving life, craving sex, getting high even (as long as she's safe about it). That's the version of Jen he loves the most, not the corporate Jen she was turning into. He loves that Jen too but worries about her, he doesn't want his wife to lose her love of life.
But people have to grow up, so they've decided to stop playing after Mike's third wish. They have it all planned out. Play out Mike's second wish for her to be with Drums, then play out his third wish. After they'll stop playing the game and live happily ever after.
So that's where we are people. Mike and Jen have it all planned out.
But have you heard the riddle – what does God call a carefully laid out plan?
Answer: A joke.
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*
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~~ Week 4 ~~
Jen and her team worked non-stop to prepare for the Memphis pitch meeting on Thursday. Mike worked around the clock on the prototype too, and the tests on Memphis data were successful.
Allie and Scott were concerned about pinning all their hopes on Mike's prototype. "I appreciate what he's doing, I really do, but he's not a marketing guy," Allie said gently to Jen. "I don't understand how the software works."
"None of us understands it," Scott said agreeing with Allie. "How do we pitch it to Memphis if we don't understand it?"
Jen shared their concerns. But in the end they decided to make Mike's software the centerpiece of their pitch. They had no choice. It was the only thing they had to distinguish themselves from the big mega-firms.
The pressure was unbearable on Jen. Her partners looked over her shoulder and questioned all her decisions. Everyone knew the importance of this meeting. If it didn't go well, they wouldn't make the cut down to the final 3 candidate lead firms.
Sometimes Jen found herself thinking of Drums. She'd smile, he was an instant tension reliever. Drums called a few times and she spared a few moments to laugh and talk with him. A few times he sang her songs over the phone. He sang silly songs and made her laugh. He sang beautiful love songs and she'd listen intently, a soft smile coming to her face.
She sooo looked forward to seeing Drums that weekend in Miami. Mike was right. After the Memphis meeting she'd be ready to either celebrate or get drunk all weekend. She decided not to tell Jamie she'd be there. She wanted to hang with Drums and his friends, and he'd be a distraction.
To Mike's surprise, Darren stepped into his office. "What are you doing here?" Mike asked smiling as they shook hands.
"I'm taking Allie to lunch," he said smiling back. "Thanks for the advice, I'm really happy."
"Have you set a date yet for the wedding?" Mike asked.
"Not yet. Allie has all these elaborate wedding plans, and she's working non-stop on the Memphis project. The wedding's probably over a year away. I'd like you to be my best man Mike."
"I'd really be honored Darren," Mike said feeling incredibly flattered and humbled. They grinned at each other. Feeling awkward, Mike changed the subject. "When are you guys launching the new Sapphire?"
"I'm not sure," Darren said shaking his head. "The SEC keeps sending us code mod requests. And we've had some turnover, Steve and Elaine resigned. Brian and the rest of the team are working as fast as they can, but it's taking time. By the way, Tara is working out really well."
"Oh, sorry to hear about Steve and Elaine, I didn't know that," Mike said.
"We hired a new CTO," Darren explained. "He's a real smart guy but Steve and Elaine didn't like working for him." Changing the subject Darren said, "Mike, remember my friends Jim and Stacy, in London?"
"Yeah, of course," Mike said. Jim and Stacy had played with Darren. More than played, Darren had gotten Stacy pregnant. That was Jim's fantasy, to have his wife impregnated by a black man. Jim and Stacy moved to Australia to have the baby.
"They're back in London, Stacy's had the baby, a girl," Darren said.
"Okay," Mike said curious, not knowing where Darren was going with this.
Darren looked intently at his best man. "I need a favor Mike," he said.
**********
"Holy shit, is that Mr. Roarke?" Allie whispered to Jen as they filed into the big conference room. Mr. Roarke was the CEO of Memphis. He hadn't been at any of the pitch meetings so far, for any of the advertising firms.
"Yeah, Keri called him for me, to get him to come," Jen whispered back.
Allie looked worriedly at Mr. Roarke sitting among all the other Memphis execs. Because Mr. Roarke was there, more Memphis execs had shown up. "So it's all or nothing," Allie said sounding scared.
"Yeah, this is our last chance," Jen whispered, trying not to appear as scared as she felt. It was all riding on this meeting. Mike's prototype worked, but her team had debated and argued about how to sell it to Memphis. The problem was, no one on her team understood how it worked. The pitch – the message – meant everything in advertising! How could she sell it when she didn't understand it? They hadn't even come up with a good name for the software. Mike was the only one who understood the software and he wasn't a marketing guy. She felt so unprepared for this meeting.
Author's note: A great benefit of writing stories is corresponding with people who are living this lifestyle in real life (in contrast to my stories that are just based -- sometimes closely, sometimes loosely -- on real life). CompersionHub told me some snippets of his hot wife with her lover, describing how her lover fucked her so good that when she got horny, she found herself thinking about her lover instead of her husband. He said her lover "used up all her horniness, so she didn't have any left for me." That line really struck me, it so captured perfectly the cuckold fetish. With CompersionHub's permission I'm using that line in this chapter.
A few comments about recent feedback ... wow, I thought "Loving Wives" readers were tough. I was wrong, they don't compare in ferocity to "Incest/Taboo" readers. Why did I abruptly use the "Incest" category for Part 15? It was intentional. I guess I can only say, the challenge with a serial is the reader can't immediately turn to the next chapter (in contrast to a book). You'll just have to wait, assuming you want to. And I am 100% okay if you want to drop off. If fact, if this story bothers you then please do, cause it ain't getting any easier for Mike.
Along the same lines, I want to respond to this comment on the last chapter:
When?
06/04/14 By: Anonymous
I first off want to thank the author of this series for taking the time to write a story that so accurately depicts the conflicting emotions of a man who loves someone but also enjoys seeing that person with someone else. It is a terrible way to go through life but it at times feel like it's something you cannot control. It becomes a journey of highs and lows that I do not think can be compared to any other personal relationship between people. Some of you call this sick and in some ways it is a sickness, it is a need to have someone you love constantly betray you and hurt you while at the same time trying to have faith that at the heart of it all they still love you. There is no cure for this other than hours and hours of therapy trying to get to the root of why a person feels the constant need to be degraded. This being said you the author have made some of us care about these characters and feel their pain and love. In an interlude in the previous series you mentioned that chapter 12 was going to finish this rollercoaster of emotions we are riding in reading this series. Now with your latest post we are only in week 3 of a proposed 9 1/2 weeks of drums and jen's dating....then we have to get to wish three. Even the greatest rollercoaster rides in the world come to an end. Can u please let us know what some kind of time frame is for ending this. This way if we want we can step back for a while and let you finish this excruciatingly accurate emotional piece. Then we can pick it up when it is finished so we don't have to wonder if this going to take us and our own feelings for these two main characters into weeks and weeks of wondering and waiting. As a personal request and I don't expect it to affect your storyline I really am hoping that you can find a way to have these two stop playing "the game" and find happiness with just each other.
So here's the timeline. We're about to start Week 4, which is a separate chapter. I think Week 5 will be a separate chapter. Weeks 6-9 kind of go together – you'll see what I mean – but I haven't decided if I'm going to combine any of the weeks in a chapter.
Then we move to the last "phase" of Consequences. Where all the loose ends get tied up. I'm not sure how many chapters that will take. Sometimes the characters start talking and I just go with it.
So, if you'd prefer to read the rest of the story as a finished work, rather than a serial, then I think Consequences will be done this summer. But I can't give you a specific date because I don't know. In the last chapter of Consequences, I'll try to remember to put "Final Chapter" or something like that in the description so you'll know it's the last one.
Then – and I'm sure this'll get a lot of cursing from those of you who despise my work -- I'll tell you there is one more story about Mike and Jen after Consequences. Hope this helps, thanks for your comment.
Some people have commented that this story is long and redundant. Here's what I'm trying to do with this story. I'm trying to document the life of a couple who are into this hot wife/cuckold lifestyle. It's an extreme fantasy and they're learning. They do something once, there's drama, so the next time they try to learn from their mistakes. You might ask, why don't they stop if there's so much drama? Because they're addicted to the excitement. And because this is fiction (please remember that).
Here's how I see their evolution:
In "He Fucked My Girl," Jen and Mike start their journey. They're both young, still in college. Jen loves Mike, but she's a romantic, and she's attracted to guys who are not good for her. Mike pushes her into Ricky's arms (because he's got a major cuckold fetish), and Jen falls heads over heels over Ricky, both because she's addicted to his body and his alpha male personality, and because she loves the thrill of a new relationship and all the NRE. Mike ends up getting really upset. Jen sees that and breaks it with Ricky.
Mike and Jen get back together. But they both still have fantasies and desires. They love each other but they go through a rough patch. Jen wasn't ready to break it with Ricky. It's not that she loved Ricky, she didn't. But the affair hadn't run its course. Mike senses that. So that kind of distances Mike and Jen. Jen's vulnerable then to when she meets Scott. And deep down Mike wants to see Jen with another guy again. This plays out in "All In My Head." But as with Ricky, there are no boundaries with their game. Jen loses herself again with Scott, and Mike adds fuel to the fire with his extreme fantasies. There's more drama, and Jen finally breaks up with Scott.
So now we get to "Making It Work." Mike and Jen now have a better understanding of each other, and themselves. Jen starts a relationship with Tom. Mike is good with it. He's more confident in himself and more secure with Jen. He's okay with Jen's affair with Tom, he's getting off on it. Jen really likes Tom, but she doesn't lose herself as she did with Ricky and Scott. She's older, has more experience, is in better control of herself, is more sensitive to Mike's feelings. Problem is, Tom really wants Jen. He forces Jen to make a choice. Jen of course chooses Mike. It really isn't a hard choice for her, other than not wanting to hurt Tom's son, who she's gotten close to.
Now we get to the present story "Consequences." Mike and Jen are 100% committed to each other. They still want to play the game, but now they are confident how to make it work for both of them. Because they're confident, they start exploring more extreme elements of the cuckold fantasy. Mike gets jealous and upset at times, but Jen has come to understand that those dark emotions turn Mike on as long as she doesn't go too far. The worse she got was with Mike's first wish, but that was exciting for both of them. So they're both really enjoying the game. Mike likes her with Drums, he loves seeing Jen wild and carefree, embracing her sensuality, being a social butterfly, being flirty, loving life, craving sex, getting high even (as long as she's safe about it). That's the version of Jen he loves the most, not the corporate Jen she was turning into. He loves that Jen too but worries about her, he doesn't want his wife to lose her love of life.
But people have to grow up, so they've decided to stop playing after Mike's third wish. They have it all planned out. Play out Mike's second wish for her to be with Drums, then play out his third wish. After they'll stop playing the game and live happily ever after.
So that's where we are people. Mike and Jen have it all planned out.
But have you heard the riddle – what does God call a carefully laid out plan?
Answer: A joke.
*
*
*
~~ Week 4 ~~
Jen and her team worked non-stop to prepare for the Memphis pitch meeting on Thursday. Mike worked around the clock on the prototype too, and the tests on Memphis data were successful.
Allie and Scott were concerned about pinning all their hopes on Mike's prototype. "I appreciate what he's doing, I really do, but he's not a marketing guy," Allie said gently to Jen. "I don't understand how the software works."
"None of us understands it," Scott said agreeing with Allie. "How do we pitch it to Memphis if we don't understand it?"
Jen shared their concerns. But in the end they decided to make Mike's software the centerpiece of their pitch. They had no choice. It was the only thing they had to distinguish themselves from the big mega-firms.
The pressure was unbearable on Jen. Her partners looked over her shoulder and questioned all her decisions. Everyone knew the importance of this meeting. If it didn't go well, they wouldn't make the cut down to the final 3 candidate lead firms.
Sometimes Jen found herself thinking of Drums. She'd smile, he was an instant tension reliever. Drums called a few times and she spared a few moments to laugh and talk with him. A few times he sang her songs over the phone. He sang silly songs and made her laugh. He sang beautiful love songs and she'd listen intently, a soft smile coming to her face.
She sooo looked forward to seeing Drums that weekend in Miami. Mike was right. After the Memphis meeting she'd be ready to either celebrate or get drunk all weekend. She decided not to tell Jamie she'd be there. She wanted to hang with Drums and his friends, and he'd be a distraction.
To Mike's surprise, Darren stepped into his office. "What are you doing here?" Mike asked smiling as they shook hands.
"I'm taking Allie to lunch," he said smiling back. "Thanks for the advice, I'm really happy."
"Have you set a date yet for the wedding?" Mike asked.
"Not yet. Allie has all these elaborate wedding plans, and she's working non-stop on the Memphis project. The wedding's probably over a year away. I'd like you to be my best man Mike."
"I'd really be honored Darren," Mike said feeling incredibly flattered and humbled. They grinned at each other. Feeling awkward, Mike changed the subject. "When are you guys launching the new Sapphire?"
"I'm not sure," Darren said shaking his head. "The SEC keeps sending us code mod requests. And we've had some turnover, Steve and Elaine resigned. Brian and the rest of the team are working as fast as they can, but it's taking time. By the way, Tara is working out really well."
"Oh, sorry to hear about Steve and Elaine, I didn't know that," Mike said.
"We hired a new CTO," Darren explained. "He's a real smart guy but Steve and Elaine didn't like working for him." Changing the subject Darren said, "Mike, remember my friends Jim and Stacy, in London?"
"Yeah, of course," Mike said. Jim and Stacy had played with Darren. More than played, Darren had gotten Stacy pregnant. That was Jim's fantasy, to have his wife impregnated by a black man. Jim and Stacy moved to Australia to have the baby.
"They're back in London, Stacy's had the baby, a girl," Darren said.
"Okay," Mike said curious, not knowing where Darren was going with this.
Darren looked intently at his best man. "I need a favor Mike," he said.
**********
"Holy shit, is that Mr. Roarke?" Allie whispered to Jen as they filed into the big conference room. Mr. Roarke was the CEO of Memphis. He hadn't been at any of the pitch meetings so far, for any of the advertising firms.
"Yeah, Keri called him for me, to get him to come," Jen whispered back.
Allie looked worriedly at Mr. Roarke sitting among all the other Memphis execs. Because Mr. Roarke was there, more Memphis execs had shown up. "So it's all or nothing," Allie said sounding scared.
"Yeah, this is our last chance," Jen whispered, trying not to appear as scared as she felt. It was all riding on this meeting. Mike's prototype worked, but her team had debated and argued about how to sell it to Memphis. The problem was, no one on her team understood how it worked. The pitch – the message – meant everything in advertising! How could she sell it when she didn't understand it? They hadn't even come up with a good name for the software. Mike was the only one who understood the software and he wasn't a marketing guy. She felt so unprepared for this meeting.
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