Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III
Welcome back Krish and thank you dear for giving this much awaited update !! The update indeed was quite a long one....  welcome


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I had some hard time believing that the initial part of update was written by you. It was very hard to digest that their society's random Narender uncle is freely touching Meera's belly. In fact he actually pinched her belly if we recall her exact words and surprisingly Meera had no objection to that. Wow !!
Don't you think this doesn't relates to reality at all.Has Meera become so easy now that anyone can now touch her without any second thoughts ??Wasn't her personality like the one where one had to think twice before engaging with her in such manner.Where is that personality of her which made her MEERA??
       For the first time ever in this story, I felt I am watching some B grade movie or some random Gossip story where such things tend to happen all of sudden without any logic, Where the girl is always ready. Although a small incident but it was undoubtedly a little disappointing to see Meera letting this happen. No expectations from Krish here, because as usual Krish always liking and getting excited and never thinking that this incident could taint Meera's image as uncle might gossip about the same with other people. But what to say we've all seen Krish ,he has stopped thinking about Meera's image ,though he is shown very wise & intelligent in the whole story but strangely in such instances he turns into a dumb person. He didn't even suggest Meera even once that she shouldn't let anyone touch her like that in open ,may it be anyone.

The update mostly comprised Meera and Harish. Although the conversation part was really good and they had some little fun too but I too strongly agree with "The Last Samurai" that it was not that exciting.
I don't know why Meera is being engaged with every character here and there. Harish isn't even worth Meera. It was enough for him even if Meera let him flirt with her but on the contrary here he is getting to watch Meera's pic in undergarments .I do not find him exciting.He is kind of immature. He might have a good physique but I guess we all have moved on from the part where character like Meera gets wooed just by looks or Body. I hope at least Meera understands the risk she is taking.

I feel you are trying to prolong the gap where story could again come back to track and meanwhile trying to fill it with this Harish's episode but honestly it might ruin it.It would have been much better if instead of bringing Harish into picture ,you could have simply added that 5-6 months passed like that and then could have continued with the story.Just suggesting .........
 Just to fill the gap ,too many physical engagements of Meera with random people tend to spoil the fun. 
In our minds, MEERA is not some ordinary woman who can be cajoled with such easy efforts like Harish did.One has to be extraordinary even to get a chance to talk to her, for instance Desai.One has to be relentless, smart ,crooked like him to get near to Meera and Honestly on top of everything being ugly and still making himself talk to Meera actually accentuates the excitement and arousal level. Susheel Desai being soooo ugly and Meera sooo good looking kind of takes arousal to another level. I unconsciously love Meera that she doesn't give much heed to looks or fitness. she is a real woman. 

But the real question is how would Susheel Desai re-enter in Krish/Meera's life is that is tend to happen. Will Krish make Meera remember her indirectly? . Will he or Meera get to randomly meet someone who knows Desai like Dr. Maithree which might bring back the topic of Desai in Krish and Meera's life. It is arousing even while imagining that how it would eventually happen. 



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Chapter-1 - by krish_999 - 10-10-2020, 04:53 AM
RE: Chapter-1 - by Givemeextra - 10-10-2020, 11:00 AM
Chapter - 2 - by krish_999 - 17-10-2020, 01:04 AM
Chapter - 3 - by krish_999 - 23-10-2020, 11:52 PM
Chapter-5 - by krish_999 - 04-11-2020, 11:47 PM
Chapter - Six - by krish_999 - 12-11-2020, 07:57 PM
Chapter-7 - by krish_999 - 19-11-2020, 07:11 AM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 24-11-2020, 04:15 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 25-11-2020, 11:45 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 15-12-2020, 10:00 AM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 15-12-2020, 11:05 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by critic_honest - 13-01-2022, 02:27 AM



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