Thriller System is supreme

[2avi]

This is gonna be a fantasy cum sci-fi novel in the later parts which will come out eventually but not immediately. Nudity, se* scenes will be almost non-existent and if at all it exists it is only to add to the plot. There is no option of genre like fantasy/sci-fi to add to the tag, so i tagged it with the next best one i.e., thriller.

And one request from me towards the audience. In some instances, i am not able to get proper vocabulary to narrate the scenes in a more intriguing and interesting fashion. So, i request you to send me suggestions regarding better sentences/vocabulary that could have been used. That way it also helps me to improve my command over English, and the audience too get a chance to have a more wholesome experience.

Also if you are giving multiple suggestions, instead of posting multiple comments for each individual suggestion, just post single comment and then edit it later posting additional suggestions.