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[Jupiter10]

well said brother. it that scene was very instantaneous but awe-inspiring. The dialogues of the story have become real and acceptable. only in some places feel like over dramatic. However, the harsh reality of the story has not been lost.that is why this story is more charming!

thanks i will work hard to write more convincing dialogues....