03-01-2022, 07:58 AM
(01-01-2022, 06:34 PM)dkan28 Wrote: Thank you for a very nice story. It would have been better if it had been a little bit longer, like including more scenes were mom is getting laid in detail, but it's your story anyway and thanks again for taking your valuable time to entertain us. I'm hoping you would write more short stories like this that has an ending, and especially in this genre. Or you can write multiple parts of the same story like in literotica, whatever it is I'm eagerly waiting for your next work.
like including more scenes were mom is getting laid in detail, >>>
I will definitely try to include these scenes when I rewrite the end part/s.
Thank you again.