01-01-2022, 05:14 PM
Wah…..koi jawab nahi, kya shandaar tareeke se har aek scene ko explain kiya hai. Maza agaya.
The way you have described Akmas feelings are exceptionally hot. Akmas ke andar ki feelings jo bahar aane ke liye ab itni utawali ho chuki hai k usko ehsaas hi nahi ho raha k woh kiya karne ja rahi hai. Usko ehsaas hi nahi k aek baat kisi gair mard se khud ko ragardwa kar, masalwa kar aur uske andar khud k liye hawas parda kar ke woh apni sharam, haya, pakeezgi, rishte sab lutwa baithe ge. Lekin Lekin Akmas ab us jagah pohanch chuki hai jaha use bas ab apne andar ki asli chudakad Akmas ko jeena hai. Apne andar ki chidakad Akmas ko mehsoos karna hai. Aur isi ehsaas ne ab Akmas ko besharam bana diya hai. Woh ab apne andar ki besharam aurat ko bahar nikalna chahti hai lekin sab se chup kar.
Ab maza aye ga Akmas ki besharmi dekhne mein aur ye k jab Akmas jaisi khandani, shareef, khoobsoorat, doodh se bhi gori pardadaar larki jo kisi ki biwi hai, beti hai, bahu hai jab apni sharam aur haya chorti hai toh kis had tak besharam aur chudakakad banti hai.
Can’t wait.
Just one suggestion if you don’t mind - I think the seduction and molesting scenes, be it with Balraj in the kitchen or with Shamsher in her bedroom were too small and ended very quickly. Please try if you can make them a little longer. Overall too good.
Waiting eagerly for the next update.
The way you have described Akmas feelings are exceptionally hot. Akmas ke andar ki feelings jo bahar aane ke liye ab itni utawali ho chuki hai k usko ehsaas hi nahi ho raha k woh kiya karne ja rahi hai. Usko ehsaas hi nahi k aek baat kisi gair mard se khud ko ragardwa kar, masalwa kar aur uske andar khud k liye hawas parda kar ke woh apni sharam, haya, pakeezgi, rishte sab lutwa baithe ge. Lekin Lekin Akmas ab us jagah pohanch chuki hai jaha use bas ab apne andar ki asli chudakad Akmas ko jeena hai. Apne andar ki chidakad Akmas ko mehsoos karna hai. Aur isi ehsaas ne ab Akmas ko besharam bana diya hai. Woh ab apne andar ki besharam aurat ko bahar nikalna chahti hai lekin sab se chup kar.
Ab maza aye ga Akmas ki besharmi dekhne mein aur ye k jab Akmas jaisi khandani, shareef, khoobsoorat, doodh se bhi gori pardadaar larki jo kisi ki biwi hai, beti hai, bahu hai jab apni sharam aur haya chorti hai toh kis had tak besharam aur chudakakad banti hai.
Can’t wait.
Just one suggestion if you don’t mind - I think the seduction and molesting scenes, be it with Balraj in the kitchen or with Shamsher in her bedroom were too small and ended very quickly. Please try if you can make them a little longer. Overall too good.
Waiting eagerly for the next update.