HK's unreal world

[Wtf99]

Bro I love what you're doing here. Specially with Katrina. I always found her hot, before the surgery and now not do much but still I always fou d there seems to be a huge scarcity of role playing stories involving Katrina and low class ugly perverts. So yours were awesome. But, I think you should add more details to the scene. I mean you just write, "and then they all banged her." The end. That's not how you should write bro, specially if that part is the meat if the story. Add more breastplay, groping, tit sucking and give detailed narration of the sex acts. Then that's a well written story. So, do just that and there will be a huge response from the readers the next time.