31-12-2021, 12:42 PM
(31-12-2021, 11:47 AM)Givemeextra Wrote: You have just started with an introduction and main adventures are not yet come
You are focusing on her past from your point of view. This will be different as it explains the reasons for her being such a slut in present
Yes, she being a slut is always there but her past will have new characters previously unread.
So Do continue pls. Don't take anything personally.
Hey Bro.... I am not saying anything bad....
Please don't mind my words... I only said what I thought as a reader..... the Name of the story "Journey of my Married life" suggests you write a story of her activities after marriage.....
Please think about it.....