31-12-2021, 11:47 AM
(This post was last modified: 31-12-2021, 11:49 AM by Givemeextra. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
(31-12-2021, 10:47 AM)FantasyKing21 Wrote: What Else could I have written..... I tried different options but none made it erotic.....
So I had to resort to using the original plot and take it in a new direction.......
I guess You should try writing..... May be you have better ideas.....
You have just started with an introduction and main adventures are not yet come
You are focusing on her past from your point of view. This will be different as it explains the reasons for her being such a slut in present
Yes, she being a slut is always there but her past will have new characters previously unread.
So Do continue pls. Don't take anything personally.
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