31-12-2021, 10:47 AM
(31-12-2021, 09:11 AM)Lust4You Wrote: Hey Bro.....
Finally thanks for posting the story..... A good start no doubt but please don't get me wrong, but you waited for so long just to present a copy of what we have already read...... I personally expected something new....
Hope your future updates could bring that change......
Please update soon.....
What Else could I have written..... I tried different options but none made it erotic.....
So I had to resort to using the original plot and take it in a new direction.......
I guess You should try writing..... May be you have better ideas.....