Adultery A Wife's Aerola (Pinjre Mein Band Chidya ) Saga

[wolfy]

Nice update but i have a feeling that this thread was written in a haste. As far as character is concerned i think the perspective of all three are different. Balraj for close proximity and being the first to ignite the fire should get more chance and coverage in the sexual and phone chatting part. Moulabi can be a challenge to her whom she will try to seduce possibly based on the situation. Samshad being an outsider and not a frequent visitor should be considered for situational sexual advantage. 

Again this is my view but as a writer your thought process and plan to create plot and subsequent progress should get priority. End objective is your satisfaction of creation a master piece which can led to absolute delight for readers.

Thanks….keep writing and entertain the readers.

Appriciate Your opinions i already have the thoughts of how and when , balraj ,shamsher, and molvi will interact with akmas ,, thanks for your opinions, this thread is a slow burner it will get hotter and hotter till the end, maybe the starting of this thread was in a haste but the end is not coming soon,