Adultery A Wife's Aerola (Pinjre Mein Band Chidya ) Saga

[wolfy]

The story is just getting hotter and hotter with each update. I don’t think I have red anything like this before. The level of seduction, eroticism and kinkiness I’m feeling is beyond explanation. In simple words I’m loving it so much. 

Now Akmas has come out of her shell and showing her true self inner slut. Akmas k undar ki asli randi ab bahar aana chahti hai jisse is hawas k gande khel mein khud ko ganda karna hai lekin sab se chup kar. Uske undar ki dark lust ab usko aek shareef biwi se randibaaz biwi bana degi. Too hot. 

I just have one suggestion bro, do not include all the male characters all of a sudden such as Molvi as it may create a khichri. When too many male characters gets involved without the female being properly opened up creates a lot of confusion and sometimes readers can’t relate with the characters. Right now Balraaj and Shamsher are doing a perfect job and Akmas can do things with them without much suspicion. Just my opinion. 

Overall the story is amazing and you are making it hotter and hotter with each new update. 

Waiting for the next one.

Thanks bhai for giving a detail positive review to this thread ,
The suggestion you have given is already in my head , but the other characters will be included in some updates to build up their character not to incounter with akmas but giving the readers the pitch of that character , no character can relate to a story without being introduce properly,, i am just building up every character dont worry every character have their own individual chances,