14-05-2019, 08:23 AM
(This post was last modified: 14-05-2019, 08:25 AM by Logan555. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
(13-05-2019, 07:35 PM)KareenaKapoorLover Wrote: Ha bhai yaha tak to padh chuke the...
Aab aage ki kahani padhni hai....
Bhai aapne Aarti ka plot wo bhoot wala banaya tha jismao aapne 2 new male caracters introduce kiye the... Wo plot meko thoda kam pasand aaya tha... usse unnecessary caracters kafi bad rahe the...
Aap uss plot jagah kuch aur bhi use kar skte ho agar aap cahe to.. As a reader i am exprssing my wish..
Bro har story me alag flavour hona chahiye jusse har story doosre se alag lage and aarti ki story apne aap me ek alag aur broad story hai aur wo story baki stories ko effect na kare aur uska flashback baki stories ki rhytham na roke isliye maine wo story ab maine sabse akhiri din transfer kardi hai pichli baar us saae ki entry wala update bhi ek din peeche khiska diya hai ab aarti ki story ke chhote mote update aate rahenge but main story with a long flashback is kahani ke akhiri din yani tenth day aaegi jab baki stories almost finish ho jaegi to jo readers aarti ki story se connect honge wahi jude rahenge baki effect nahi honge.
Baki wo story baki story ke end tak baki stories ko bhi effect karegi jis wajah se jab har kirdar ki indivisual alag story aaegi is story ke baad tab waha wo effect pata chalega.
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