14-05-2019, 01:39 AM
(13-05-2019, 04:43 PM)komaalrani Wrote: bahoot se logo ne ye kahani nahi padhi hai unke liye abrupt lagegga phir main aaj kal apni nayi kahan MOHE RANG de men bhi busy hun.... isliye ....uske khatam hone ke bad hi ....
But I think, the story can be trimmed to slight lesser length than the original..I mean there were some parts which can be erased and it will not impact the story flow ...but please spare all the sex encounters and their build ups ...
U r the best to know it better how to do..