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Adultery Bhikari ke saath bus ka safar
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Sahi hai bilkul maine socha long story likhne se fayda nahi 2 ya 3 page mai story end kar do... Lamba likhne se cmmt aane band ho jate hai jaise abhi haweli wali kahani likhi.... Mere prob yahi hai normal likhta ho shuru mai cmmt a aate hai bad mai kam hote hote khatam ho jate hai aur bewakoof ki tarah likhte raho....

Aur mere interfaith hi sab ko pasand aati hai ab usi par aage likhonga....
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Bhikari ke saath bus ka safar - by adimum - 19-12-2021, 07:03 PM
RE: Bhikari ke saath bus ka safar - by Kishore12 - 21-12-2021, 04:00 PM
RE: Bhikari ke saath bus ka safar - by Aman003 - 22-12-2021, 05:27 PM
RE: Bhikari ke saath bus ka safar - by Lion King 989 - 22-12-2021, 10:48 PM
RE: Bhikari ke saath bus ka safar - by Kara lina - 30-12-2021, 03:15 AM



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