22-12-2021, 06:58 PM
(22-12-2021, 06:23 PM)Bdrew86 Wrote: Those who want to read the first part of this story with English dialogue can read it on literotica
Link on given below.
https://..'.s/breaking-and-entering-pt-01
I liked this style of yours much more.. You can't imagine thugs speaking afluent english.. They are dehaati and they talk desi trash..and you did a commendable job on it..
. It creates a realistic scene in front of you