21-12-2021, 10:55 AM
This story is very confusing... First FIL fucked DIL in a Lodge (she acting like fainted), but said not fucked yet in later part of story. Then when FIL and DIL fuck in kitchen, her husband was coming, but she saying father is coming. Later that man was told having zero vision without glasses. So son has bad vision without glasses, but his father (FIL) has good vision in dark so that he fucks his DIL dearly in dark kitchen. Actually this scene reminds another story "Kaamathil thilaikum manam", where the intruder is her real father with bad eye vision without glasses.
Too many side characters, like her friend with her own version of experiences. Friend of FIL, who just flew away, etc...
Last confusion is, whether the story is ended or not.
Kindly take this feedback positively and continue the story, if this is not finished yet. Thanks...
Too many side characters, like her friend with her own version of experiences. Friend of FIL, who just flew away, etc...
Last confusion is, whether the story is ended or not.
Kindly take this feedback positively and continue the story, if this is not finished yet. Thanks...


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