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Adultery HUA KUCH AISA by Gulnaaz_banatwala
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Gul, bahut achhi updates de rahi ho ab. Aise hi chalao kahani ko. Jahan tak baat replies ki hai to aapko replies bhi aate rahenge par sirf achhe readers ke baaki aisa hai ke yahan par sirf 2-3 percent readers hi reply dete hain. Aap check karna ke aapki story ke kitne views hain aur kitne replies hain to confirm ho jayega. Issliye replies ki chinta mat karo aur story par dhyaan do. Details abhi bhi bahut zyada hain. Roz ke kaam hote rehte hain. Sab samajhte hain. usske liye you can just start with 'naashte ke baad.........' na ki saari detail do uthne, chai peene, shahnaaz ko uthane etc. Pls dont mind, I am just suggesting.
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HUA KUCH AISA by Gulnaaz_banatwala - by sarit11 - 22-12-2018, 11:28 AM
RE: HUA KUCH AISA by Gulnaaz_banatwala - by sarit11 - 22-12-2018, 01:21 PM
RE: HUA KUCH AISA by Gulnaaz_banatwala - by RajAg - 07-05-2019, 05:40 AM
RE: HUA KUCH AISA by Gulnaaz_banatwala - by RajAg - 17-05-2019, 01:06 AM
RE: HUA KUCH AISA by Gulnaaz_banatwala - by RajAg - 25-06-2019, 03:47 PM
RE: HUA KUCH AISA by Gulnaaz_banatwala - by RajAg - 30-06-2019, 07:23 PM
RE: HUA KUCH AISA by Gulnaaz_banatwala - by RajAg - 07-07-2019, 01:30 AM
RE: HUA KUCH AISA by Gulnaaz_banatwala - by RajAg - 02-08-2019, 03:04 AM
RE: HUA KUCH AISA by Gulnaaz_banatwala - by Lovly - 04-09-2022, 03:29 PM
RE: HUA KUCH AISA by Gulnaaz_banatwala - by Lovly - 04-09-2022, 07:48 PM
RE: HUA KUCH AISA by Gulnaaz_banatwala - by Lovly - 06-09-2022, 12:47 PM
RE: HUA KUCH AISA by Gulnaaz_banatwala - by Lovly - 14-09-2022, 12:10 AM
RE: HUA KUCH AISA by Gulnaaz_banatwala - by Lovly - 18-09-2022, 07:34 AM
RE: HUA KUCH AISA by Gulnaaz_banatwala - by Lovly - 11-12-2022, 07:29 PM
RE: HUA KUCH AISA by Gulnaaz_banatwala - by Lovly - 03-05-2023, 08:12 AM
RE: HUA KUCH AISA by Gulnaaz_banatwala - by Lovly - 05-05-2023, 07:18 AM



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